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The Watchable “Spider-Man”

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Last night I went to see “The Amazing Spider-Man.”  It was a good movie.  It was well-shot, the story worked, it hit all the beats it needed to, and the actors did a good job.  It had the kind of sequence towards the end that the little kid in me melts for, every single time.  The Stan Lee cameo was the best yet.  But honestly, well, I wasn’t amazed by it.

I really like the character of Spider-Man.  He has cool powers, he has an engaging origin story, his foes are (usually) just colorful enough without wandering to far into camp.  He’s had a good run of stories.  He had a trilogy of movies in the last decade.  And this movie is… a retelling of his origin.

And it isn’t a bad retelling.  The scenes where Peter is unused to his powers and accidentally beats up a train car of people Jackie Chan-style is fun, but I can guarantee you that every single person in the theater had seen this story before ten years ago.  “Amazing” files off the serial numbers, throws up a different filter, and calls it a day.  It is the essence of the summer blockbuster:  Two pleasant hours in air conditioning.  It doesn’t show you anything new.

“The Avengers” succeeded because it was a gamble.  Having such a large cast was a risk.  Using the film as a capstone for four separate movie franchises was a risk.  Giving the project to Joss Whedon, who has a loyal fan base but a terrible record in film, was a HUGE RISK.  “The Amazing Spider-Man” is the very essence of a hedge.  It is a contractual obligation to keep Marvel from using the character in “Avengers 2.”

I liked “The Amazing Spider-Man”  It was a funny, mad science action romp fitting the character, but there weren’t any surprises or ‘wow’ moments.  It is worth a rental, or a trip to the second-run theater, but don’t swing out to see it in 3-D.

Review-Free Will and Other Compulsions by J. Daniel Sawyer

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Free Will on Goodreads

J. Daniel Sawyer’s “Free Will” is a smart, sexy cyberpunk novel worthy to be placed on the shelves next to Gibson, Varley, and Heinlein.  It has a very unique voice, a wonderfully diverse cast of characters, and plenty of thrills, but it isn’t without its flaws.
Free Will and Other Compulsions is the second novel in the “Antithesis Progression.”  The story follows geopolitical events and personal stories as the American space colony Luna City prepares to start a revolt against its earthbound controllers.  While this isn’t exactly unbroken ground, Sawyer establishes a very rich history for the different space colonies.   Not all of them are working towards the same goal.  Luna City, while full of clever hat tips to the Masters of Science Fiction, is established as a haven for groups outcast on Earth for their beliefs, politics, or sexual identity.  Parts of it read like “The Moon is a Harsh Mistress” with big gay dock workers, which is awesome.
The rest of the story follows scheming Senator Bill Shelly, who is manipulating the situation to his own ends, and the personal and political fallout as all the people he’s burned over the years, including poker playing anti-hero and former national security advisor Joss Kyle, and even his own daughter, come back to haunt him.
There are a few flaws, however.  This is the second book in the series, and Sawyer assumes that readers are familiar with all of the details from the first book, Predestination and Other Games of Chance.  The world is very detailed, and it is well researched, especially where the author extrapolates technology out another century, but there are so many factions, characters, places and technologies, that a glossary would have been helpful.  He also assumes the reader has a good grasp of science, politics, and theology, rarely holding the readers hand.  This is a challenging thrill ride that isn’t afraid to take chances.  Like it’s characters, “Free Will” lays its cards on the table and bets that the reader will be able to keep up.  It doesn’t always pay off, but when it does, it works beautifully.
The novel follows a huge cast and sweeps them into a vast tumble of world events.  We follow these characters in chapters that follow dramatically, but don’t quite sync up chronologically, and the results can be disorienting, but Sawyer manages the human element well enough that even if the events get lost, the characters shine through, and keep us invested.  Plot threads weave sinuously and cleverly together, and reinforce one another in surprising ways.  These diverse plot threads come together so well that by the end it becomes difficult to find the seams between them.  In the end, it is difficult to say what the main plot of the novel is.
“Predestination” is a novel about running from, and ultimately facing, difficult decisions.  “Free Will” is a novel about facing consequences.  The “Progression” is still under construction, with at least three more novels in the works.  I think fans of the first book will still be on board after “Free Will.”  Personally, I can’t wait to see where the Lunar Revolution goes next.
Note:  This article is based on an earlier draft of the novel.  Some differences likely exist between the reviewed copy and the final release, including edits of grammar and spelling.

360,000 words: A Goal for 2012

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This year, I decided I was too busy to participate in National Novel Writing Month. And maybe this was a good decision. I got a lot done that I wouldn’t have if I was writing a fifty thousand word manuscript. But what I didn’t do was write. I wanted to show up at the page, and without the structure of Nanowrimo, I didn’t. I wrote 5,400 words of fiction in November. I released three podcast episodes, and did recording and production work on others that will be released this month. I didn’t do badly, but I didn’t do as well as I would like.

So I’m going to try something else.

I believe in Nanowrimo. But November is only one month a year, and a year is a long time. Fifty thousand words is a lot to write in a month. I think a more realistic goal is to write a thousand words a day. But some days are more difficult than others. This is the challenge I’m giving myself:

Thirty Thousand Words a month, 360,000 words for 2012.

I still have a month before the new year, but I’m going to start working now. This isn’t just going to count fiction, either. Blog posts, reviews, everything. I’ll be tracking my progress here. If you are a writer, I hope you’ll join me. If the world does end in 2012, let’s write like there’s no tomorrow.

The Week in Productivity, Week Five

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Welcome to October, Ladies and Gents!

It has been a busy but wonderful week for me.  My dear friends Sarah and Jenn got LEGALLY married, and those happy events took up the beginning of this productivity week.

But we’re here to talk about productivity, so let’s have at it!

Writing:

My writing goal for this week was to write 2,000 words, and not only did I meet it, I blew it out of the water with a total of 4,137 words written over four one hour writing sessions.  Because of the wedding, all of this writing was done in October.  Looking back, I only wrote 6,500 words for September and didn’t really finish anything.  Looking at the pattern of the first month, the reasons for this seem pretty clear.  I’m not making enough time for writing, and even when I am, I let myself get distracted by the internet or other things.  This week’s progress is thanks to the fact that I committed to working for an hour every time I sat down to write.  Sometimes I wrote less than others, but I stayed in the chair, and I stayed off the internet.  I’m starting to get close to finishing the draft of the novella I’m working on, and if I keep working at this pace, I should be able to get a few short stories done before National Novel Writing Month in November.

Podcasting:

I still haven’t release episode 22, but I’ve finished recording the story, and I’ve done my first pass of the audio for the interview.  I’m going to be working on that some more when I finish sending this off.  I also recorded my third interview for November last night, and I can’t wait for people to hear it.  I still need one more, though.

In Summary:

I didn’t make my goal of releasing the next episode of The Way of the Buffalo Podcast, but I doubled my writing goal.  This week I’m going to finish 22, work on 23, and write another 2,500 words on top of it.  Can I do it?  Find out next Wednesday night!

The Week In Productivity, Week Four

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For the first time since week one, I’m doing this on time.  I feel slightly accomplished.

It’s been a pretty good week for productivity.  Let’s take a look:

Writing:

Since the last post, I’ve only gotten three writing sessions in, but I managed to meet my goal of writing 2,000 words, for a total of 2,331. I’d like to get some more writing done tonight, but there is a lot going on, so we’ll see if that happens.  I feel like I’m closing in on the end of the novella I’m working on, but the story keeps spooling out in unexpected directions.  After edits, I’m not sure how long it’s going to be yet.

The other writing goal I met for this week was putting a short story through the Smashwords Meat grinder!  I tested the system using “Moving Mountains,” the story I had published this spring on the “Every Photo Tells” Podcast.  You can still listen to the story for free on their site, or at the archive on podiobooks.com.  The story is available as a pay-what-you-want download HERE.  I know I need to fix some things, but I’d love to get some feedback on my mistakes so far.

Podcasting:

This week I recorded the story reading for the next episode, and an interview to be aired in November, during the great NaNoWriMo crunch.  I have a lot left to do to get the episode up, though, and it might show up on Saturday instead of Friday.  I’m very proud of the interview in this one, so I’m going to get back to work on it.

Next Week:

I’m helping out with a wedding this weekend, so that’ll be taking up a lot of my time, plus finishing the episode.  But I’ll get that episode out, and churn out another 2,000 words of rough draft.

Or will I?  Come back next week!

The Week In Productivity, Week 3

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The fact that this week’s post is half a week late sets the tone for this one.  I’ve been scrambling around, but I don’t feel like I’ve gotten much of anything done.

Writing:

I fell far short on my writing goals last week.  I wrote 1,172 words across three writing sessions in two projects.  Personal deadlines are looming.  As Summer gives way to fall, it is time for me to get into gear for Nanowrimo.  This is less than what I’ll be writing per DAY in November, and I’ve got to work my way up to it.

Podcasting:

I did manage to upload episode 21 of The Way of the Buffalo Podcast, and I’m very happy with the results.  Go have a listen to 20 and 21 and let me know what you think.  If we can get enough interest, Sarah and I will be doing a Kickstarter in the near future to fund making a free audiobook of the whole thing!

Other:

I spent the whole day on Saturday helping out at the annual cookout for Transplant Miracles Foundation, a transplant awareness and fundraising charity started by my cousin.  It was a lot of fun, but I really wore myself out.  It’s a lesson to remember going forward.

Next Week:

This week I set an optimistic writing goal and got writer’s block.  This week, I’m going to be a bit more slow and steady.  I’d like to write 2,000 words, but more importantly, I want to sit down and write at least four separate times between now and the end of the day on Wednesday.  Also, I need to get episode 22 up before the end of the month.  A friend is getting married on Friday, so I’d like to be comfortably finished ahead of time for once.

Will I make my goals?  Find out next week! (ish)

The Week in Productivity: Week Two

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Howdy folks!  I’m knee deep in mixing down the next episode for The Way of the Buffalo, so here’s a quick summary of my progress in the past week.

Writing:

My writing goal was to reach 2,000 words this week, and I made it.  I had five short writing sessions, each an hour or less, and I managed to add 2,049 words to “The Shadow Over Ironwood,” the novella I am currently working on.  I also started a new short story that has been rattling around in my head.  It doesn’t have a title yet, but I got roughly the first 400 words done, for a grand total of 2,453 words for the week.

Podcasting:

I didn’t have an interview this week, but I’ve been working on episode 21.  It should be up on the site by the end of Friday.  I had a very interesting Google + hangout with a member of the Buffalo WordPress Meetup Group, and got some tips for improving my websites.  (Thanks, Danielle!)  So I did some light recording and editing, and will be doing more tonight after this post goes live.

Misc:

I have two new projects on the horizon, and I figure I’ll make the announcement here.

The first is that I am actively soliciting clients for my audio trailer business, and have created a fiverr.com account for the service.  Click HERE to check it out.

The second is that I have signed up for smashwords, and will be putting my first ebook up by the month’s end.  I’ll be promoting the heck out of it once it goes up.

Goals:

I got a lot done in short bursts this week, and I’m looking forward to seeing what I can get done with more concentrated effort.  I’m upping my word count goal to 2,500 for next week.  My goal for the podcast is to record the two stories I have ready to go, and send out contracts for new ones.  Will I make my goals?  Find out next week!

The Week in Productivity: Week One

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I’ve decided to try a new experiment, since I’m not in the habit of posting on the blog yet.

Last week, on the Dead Robots Society Podcast, there was an interview with author Rachel Aaron, who has a method for writing that lets her write upwards of 10,000 words a day!  Since National Novel Writing Month is looming on the horizon, and I have not been writing as much as I want to, I’m giving it a try.

The first part of her method is keeping track of your writing.  The second half is to outline before you sit down to write.  Both of these seem like great, simple, and obvious ideas, so I’ve started keeping track, and to keep myself honest, I’m going to be putting my results here.  Look for a new post every Wednesday!

Week One:

Writing:

This week got off to a rocky start.  I only got any serious writing time in on Saturday morning, putting in about 600 words.

Podcasting:

I’ve been a bit more productive with the Way of the Buffalo.  I edited and released episode 20 on Friday, and recorded an interview last night that will be in the feed later this fall.  I’m almost up to date on the slush pile as well, having done my first pass.  I do have to send out some emails tonight, however.

Next week:

This week was a rocky first start, but I’m not going to let that stop me.  My goal is to write 2000 words in the novella I’m working on, and do first pass edits on some short story drafts I have laying around.  Will I make my goals?  Come back next week and find out!

Otakon 2011 Wrap-up & Reviews

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Last weekend, I traveled down to Baltimore and went to Otakon, a massive, three day anime convention held every year downtown.  I attended a bunch of panels, including a very interesting two-hour panel on voice acting, and saw a bunch of interesting Japanese animation.  Here’s what I saw, and what I thought of it.

Baccano!

The first anime I caught was two episodes of period fantasy “Baccano!”  adapted from a novel, the series focuses on a large ensemble cast of gangsters, thieves, and bootleggers in the United States during the Great Depression.  There is a framing device about an organization that observes historically significant events, and the series jumps around in time a bit in the first episode before getting down to business in the second.

The plot deals with a New York City gang war, as well as the upcoming trial of an Alchemist.  There is a train full of characters heading for Grand Central Station, some of whom are followers who want to see the mysterious figure freed, others who want to steal his secrets.  Not much is clear, but it is evident that some of the Mafia players have already gained immortality, and have an unsettling ability to shrug off hit attempts.

I had seen clips of the series in AMV’s, and after two episodes, I bought the boxed set.  I’m looking forward to seeing where all these plot threads wind up.

Rating:  A

Gundam 00:  Awakening of the Trailblazer

Next, I caught a showing of the movie sequel to the series Gundam 00.  The plot is a bit of a deviation from the standard “war against war” plot of the series, but still manages to deliver enough fan service, cameos, and missile-blasting special effects to keep the pickiest G-fan happy.  Without spoiling anything, the event that Gundam wielding secret society Celestial Being was formed to confront is happening more than two hundred years sooner than expected, and humanity is still unprepared.  When an exploratory ship from Jupiter arrives with all-hands missing, and strange events start happening on earth, it’s up to Gundam pilot and “Innovator” Setsuna to save the day, but first he has to come to grips with his own abilities.

The effects were still on the spectacular level I’ve come to expect from this series, and the climactic space battle lasted at least half of the film, but I still found the climax to be a bit of a let down.  Still, it was giant robot fun with an enjoyable veneer of politics and conspiracy.

Rating:  B+

The Sacred Blacksmith

Saturday morning, I watched an cute little fantasy series about a female knight, a blacksmith/swordsman with a magical assistant, and a sentient ‘Demon Sword’ incarnated as a young woman.

The show had an interesting “Visions of Escaflowne” meets “Revolutionary Girl Utena” vibe, complete with lesbian subtext.  I thought that the dialogue was sharp, even for an English dub, and though the animation was a bit on the cheap side by modern standards, I really liked the character designs.

Rating B-

Wagnaria

Due to a change in the schedule, I saw a few episodes of a simple, ‘slice of life’ series about a teenager who takes a job working at a family-style restaurant.

The series was cute and silly, lifting whole script pages from earlier series like “Love Hina” and “Azumanga Daioh.”  There was even a girl who was blatantly ripped off of Chiyo-chan, leading to a ‘hilarious’ scene where the main character has to explain how he isn’t a pedophile.  Reliably executed if it’s that’s your kind of thing, but not really to my taste.

Rating C+

Coffee Samurai

In spite of the title, this was actually a Korean short, running about 45 minutes, and though the designs were simple, and the animation was bare-bones, it was a charming little film.  The story deals with an exceptionally powerful warrior, who, when he is defeated in battle, wishes with his dying breath to be reborn into an ‘invincible steel body.’  Two hundred years later, he is reincarnated as a coffee vending machine, although he has lost none of his martial prowess.  The story starts when he has a chance encounter with a graduate student, and the two fall in love.

“Coffee Samurai” is charming perhaps because it treats its action scenes with complete seriousness, even when the participants are vending machines and playground equipment.

Rating:  B+

That was all of the anime I was able to watch this year, the rest was the usual blur of costumes, video games, and the dealers room.  I was able to pick up some “Vampire Hunter D” novels, which are my reading guilty pleasure, and also play a genuine “Taiko Drum Master” arcade machine in the video game room, which I haven’t done since I lived in Osaka, and missed.  It was a good convention, all in all, and I’m looking forward to the next one, UB Mini-con this October.

A Short Introduction

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Welcome to the new blog of writer and podcaster Hugh J. O’Donnell!  (That’s me.)
I’m the one man band behind the Way of the Buffalo Podcast, (http://wayofthebuffalopodcast.blogspot.com) and I’m also a writer.  This will be a blog charting my course through the unexplored waters of new media and self publishing.  (Except for everyone who has already done it, of course.)  Over the next few weeks I’ll be setting up this site into something a bit more presentable, with links, images, and possibly even a theme!  At the moment, I’m about two episodes of podcast and a few thousand words of short story behind, so I don’t have the time to tidy up.  Let yourself it, leave a comment, and say hi on twitter.  (@hatchingphoenix)
Thanks for stopping in, and check back soon, there’ll be a lot more here in a week or two!

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