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Everyday Drabbles #1145: Candlelight

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The Menorah sat in a transparent box in a corner of the hold, with its own small oxygen supply and exhaust system. An open flame was a terrible hazard on a space ship, but an electric one wouldn’t do.
She closed her eyes, said the prayers, and lit the candle. She would have to calculate the burn trajectory and timing before going into suspended animation. The gauges said they were low on fuel and oxygen. But the little ship had come through for them before, and the message had to get through.
She had faith that it would be enough.

Hanukkah menorah” by skpy is licensed under CC BY-SA 2.0.

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Everyday Drabbles #79: Snowfall (Repost)

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For the first time in a hundred years, the forecast called for snow.
Stories of winter had been passed down through the generations, and everyone had seen blizzards in old movies or documentary footage. But no living soul ever caught a snowflake on their tongue.
The whole town shut down as people gathered to watch the skies. They set up lawn chairs in the parks and gathered on rooftops, buzzing excitedly and clutching thermoses of hot cocoa and coffee.
Between the myriad car accidents, cases of frostbite, and complaints of being snowed in, the town didn’t reopen for three weeks.

Snowfall on 12/31/14 – Along Barker Dam trail” by Joshua Tree National Park is marked with Public Domain Mark 1.0.

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Everyday Drabbles #1144: Following The Star

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The three companions travelled west through the desert, sore and tired. Each is a king, but they travel without servants or retainers. Biter rivals, all three of them saw the sign: a star moving backwards in its orbit. So they follow it together, to prevent the others from stealing whatever lies at the journey’s end for themselves.
High above them, the angels push the star against its proper orbit. They are sore and tired, but they push because it is The Plan. Still, one turns to their companions and mutters under their breath.
“This portent could have been an email.”

(4706 x 3084) Three Magi (Balthasar, Melchior, and Gaspar) Ravenna” by Carole Raddato is licensed under CC BY-SA 2.0.

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Everyday Drabbles #1143: Snow Day

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The snow fell steadily and thick through the night, making the dawn less of a rising of the sun and more of a gradual lightening from black to a powdery gray-white that faded into a insubstantial flurry.
It was a snow day if ever there was one.
The snow piled up against doors and windows. It buried cars and made roads a slippery mess.
He watched the flakes fall and sighed. It would be the perfect day to stay warm and cozy inside with a mug of cocoa. He could use the break.
But someone had to drive the plow.

Snow Road” by quinet is licensed under CC BY 2.0.

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Everyday Drabbles #1142: Gift-Wrapped

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“Would you like this gift-wrapped?” The cashier asked.
Even though the book wasn’t a present, he felt just a bit happier with the shiny package tucked under his arm.
More things should be gift-wrapped, he decided.
And he put his plan into action. He wrapped up small things around the house at first. It made everything feel more festive, so he just kept going.
When he wrapped up his wife’s car, she put her foot down.
“You don’t like it?” He asked.
“It’s not that I don’t like it, but it’s April. And I’m late for work,” she replied, exasperated.

Gift Wrapping 13” by origamiguy1971 is licensed under CC BY 2.0.

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Hugh Likes Comics: Star Trek Lower Decks: Warp Your Own Way

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Star Trek Lower Decks: Warp Your Own Way

Written by Ryan North

Drawn by Chris Fenoglio

Colored by Charlie Kerchoff

Lettered by Jeff Eckleberry

Published by IDW

The Skinny: A Choosable Path Adventure that feels like a great stand-alone episode of Star Trek.

Star Trek Lower Decks: Warp Your Own Way is a ‘choosable path adventure’ set somewhere in the continuity of Star Trek: Lower Decks, by the creative team that has been killing it recently with a recent ongoing series, delightful one-shots, and surprising minis. While I have read a little of their previous work, I haven’t seen more than the first couple of episodes of the show. But I greatly enjoyed this graphic novel as a bit of a taste of what the show is like, written by a writer squarely in his wheelhouse and drawn by an artist who knows exactly what they are doing.
North is no stranger to ‘Choosable Path’ stories, having writing the wonderful and surprising To Be or Not To Be and Romeo and/or Juliet, a pair of prose Shakespeare choosable path adventures that are somewhat a bit more complex than this entry, but share a similar tone and excitement for the genre. The graphic novel format has its own advantages in conveying the compact information more quickly, and drawing the eye in ways that a prose page cannot. North and Fegoglio also captures the magic of Star Trek’s more daring and experimental episodes, directly referencing some of the highlights of the franchise as well including some wilder easter eggs. Depending on the choices the reader makes, series main character Mariner and the crew of the Cerritos could fight off an invasion by Borg, a hostile attack from Khan himself, or a visit from a hard-partying space god. But as each story branch reaches its conclusion, readers will notice a pattern emerging.  This is the point where the book goes from referential game to something much more interesting and special.
North has a gift for understanding and manipulating the structure of media he’s working in. Warp Your Own Way isn’t simply a riff on the “Choose Your Own Adventure” novel format with a Star Trek: Lower Decks license. North and Fenoglio understand the assignment on a deeper level, and use the structure of a graphic novel and choosable path format to tell a Star Trek story in a way that only they could pull off.
My favorite episodes of Star Trek are the ones where they break away from the usual structures and plots and do something strange and different; like the Star Trek: TNG episode “Cause and Effect,” which was essentially a repeat of the same period of time due to the ship being caught in a time loop. This book ultimately has some of that energy.
Fenoglio’s art is pleasing and easy to follow, which works well in a few sequences that break not only the story structure but the page itself in a fun way. Kerchoff’s colors are bright and eye-catching and just what you expect for a book like this. It matches what I’ve seen of the show, but I’m not an expert there.
If there is a flaw it is that this book feels somewhat detached from the source material of Lower Decks itself. There are some sequences that establish the characters, but there is a broadness to the story that feels like it could be pulled from any Star Trek series, swapping the crew of the Cerritos for the Enterprise or Voyager and still come through relatively unchanged. Having seen very little of Lower Decks, I can’t really be sure here, and this wasn’t a detriment to me as a new reader coming in. New readers won’t have to catch up to enjoy the story.
Star Trek Lower Decks: Warp Your Own Way is available now in print from Your Local Comics Shop or digitally wherever you buy books or comics.

Everyday Drabbles #1141: Christmas Wish

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She believed in wishes and the power of Christmas. As the clock struck midnight, she looked up at the star atop the tree and wished with her whole heart for Peace on Earth.
For a brief time, her wish came true.
But the bough wilts, and the colored light burn out. The wish’s power faded, and by the morning of December 26th, the world reverted back to its old ways.
But she remembers. And now that she knows that world is possible, she is going to do more than wish. She’ll make it happen with the power of her actions.

Christmas Star” by Bill Ward’s Brickpile is licensed under CC BY 2.0.

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Everyday Drabbles #1140: Polar Night

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Ginger watches the last flight out disappear into the twilight sky. In a few hours, the sun will sink behind the ice floes, brining on six months of polar night.
They say that you get a little crazy if you go too long without seeing the sun. She hopes that she’ll be too busy to notice. It was trials like this that separated the toymakers from the cookie bakers.
She takes a last drag on her cigarette and crushes it beneath a curly green boot. Ginger worked hard to get here, and she isn’t going to let Santa Claus down.

Polar Night Light Festival” by timo_w2s is licensed under CC BY-SA 2.0.

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Everyday Drabbles #1139: Sugar Cookie

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He was famous for his Christmas cookies. He spent the rest of the year seeking out new recipes, practicing, and hunting out unique flavors to elevate his creations.
While a few of his less adventurous relatives chided him about introducing them to taro or five-spice blends, his elaborately filled and decorated cookie tins were the toast of the season.
The year he got sick, he panicked that Christmas would be ruined.
He heard a knock at the door and found a box of plain sugar cookies made for him by his niece.
It was the best cookie he’d ever tasted.

Sugar Cookies” by sinksanctity is licensed under CC BY 2.0.

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Everyday Drabbles #1138: Ribbons & Bows

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The shoppe was on the High Street, within an arrow’s flight of the palace gates. It sold accessories to well-to-do women of the kingdom, but had a reputation for serving anyone, no matter their station.
The highborn clientele put up with this leveling because their service was impeccable, as were their products. It was a well-beloved institution, and as it was a shop for women, practically invisible to the eyes of the authorities.
They sold ribbons to the servants and commoners, bows to the ton, and if you whispered the right phrase in the right ear, arrows for the revolution.

Dorking High Street – Oct 2011 – Bellbottom Candid” by Gareth1953 All Right Now is licensed under CC BY 2.0.

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